书面表达句式多样化多样化Sentence Variety in Writing （ppt课件）-2023届高三英语一轮复习.pptx

1、Sentence Variety in Writing 书面表达句式多样性 Writing第五档（21-25分）档次的给分范围和要求（1）完全完成试题规定的任务。（2）覆盖所有内容要点。（3）应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。（4）语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力（5）有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑（6）完全达到了预期的写作目的。审题准、要点全、句子美、卷面洁2要点全1审题准3句子美4卷面洁 lack of varied sentence patternsHow to solve this problem?V-ed定从定从wi

2、th结构V-ing主从定从倒装A balanced healthy eating habit should be formedWe should form a balanced healthy eating habit.sb.do sth.sth.be done are necessary.is necessary to drink water and to eat breakfast.ItThey are drinking water and eating breakfast.Drinking water and eating breakfastWhat she needs is to ha

3、ve a good rest.She needs to have a good rest.主从 Doing outdoor sports benefits us most.What benefits us most is doing outdoor sports.skill 1variety in Subject主语多样化sthDoing/To doIt 作形式主语主语从句(what)A balanced healthy diet is a must for teenagers.It provides the body with nutrition to fight many diseases

4、.定从A balanced healthy diet which provides the body with nutrition to fight many diseases is a must for teenagers.A balanced healthy diet is a must for teenagers.It provides the body with nutrition to fight many diseases.非谓语A balanced healthy diet providing the body with nutrition to fight many disea

5、ses is a must for teenagers.We are supposed to arrange an occasional short holiday,which can give us a relief from the pressure of work./giving us a relief from.We are supposed to arrange an occasional short holiday.It can give us a relief from the pressure of work.skill 2variety in Attribute定语多样化定从

6、非谓语 College Entrance Examination is drawing near,we senior 3 students are occupied with study.we sleep well enough at night,we can be more attentively having classes.AsIfwhen/while状从 College Entrance Examination _ near,we senior 3 students are occupied with study._ .well enough at night,we can be mo

7、re attentively when/while having classes.WithSleeping非谓语drawingskill 3variety in Adverbial状语多样化状从非谓语V-ed定从定从with结构V-ing主从定从倒装强调句倒装句Outdoor sports offer us an opportunity to get close to nature and promote our physical health.Not only+助助/情情/系系+主主.,but 主主+谓谓.Not only do outdoor sports offer us an oppo

8、rtunity to get close to nature but also they promote our physical health.It is/was+被强调部分被强调部分+that+其他其他It is outdoor sports that offer us an opportunity to get close to nature and promote our physical health.skill 4Special structure特殊结构Inversion倒装句强调句SummarySentence Variety 句式多样化Skill 1主语多样化Skill 2定

9、语多样化Skill 3状语多样化Skill4特殊句式sthDoing/To doIt 形主主从定从非谓语状从非谓语倒装句强调句WritingFirst of all,Besides,Last but not least,主题句+建议+理由 To meet the challenges of the senior year,living a healthy life is of great importance.First of all,a balanced healthy diet is a must for teenagers,which provides the body with nut

10、rition to fight many diseases.Besides,enough sleep will make us wake up every morning with a new brain.If we sleep enough,our memory will be improved,so that we can learn more effectively.Last but not least,what benefits us most is doing exercise regularly.Not only does doing exercise promote our physical health,but also it makes a great difference on our mental health.A Good CompositionIt matters!We should not vary sentences for the sake of varying!不能为了复杂而复杂！Assignment:Continue to polish your writing and share withe your partner.