精选精析15.读后续写类25篇（六）-2021届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析（一）.docx

2021 届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析（一）届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析（一）15 读后续写类读后续写类 25 篇（六）篇（六） 1.（2020 广东梅州市 高三月考）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写两段，使之构成一 个完整的故事。 Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus. Finally, there was only one family between us and the ticket counter. This family made a big impression on me. There were eight children, all probably under the age of twelve. You could tell they didnt have a lot of money. Their clothes were not expensive, but they were clean. The children were well-behaved, all of them standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, holding hands. They were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants, and other acts they would see that night with their brothers or sisters in a low voice. One could sense they had never been to the circus before. It promised to be highlight of their young lives. The father and mother were at the head of the pack, standing proud as could be. The mother was holding her husbands hand, looking up at him as if to say, You are my knight in shining armor. He was smiling and responding in pride, looking back at her as if to say, You got that right. The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted. He proudly responded, Please let me buy eight childrens tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus. The ticket lady gave the price. The mans wife let go of his hand, her head dropped, and his lips began to shake. The father leaned a little closer and asked, How much did you say? The ticket lady again gave the price. The man didnt have enough money. How was he supposed to turn and tell his eight children that he didnt have enough money to take them to the circus? Actually we were not wealthy in any sense. So I understand how the kids would feel. I felt sorry for them. 注意： 1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； Paragraph 1 Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground. ___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________ Paragraph 2 That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______ 【答案】Paragraph 1 Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground. Then he picked it up and tapped the man on the shoulder and said, Excuse me, sir. This fell out of your pocket. The man turned around and saw the money. He knew what was going on. He looked straight into my dads eyes, took my dads hand in both of his, squeezed tightly onto the $20 bill, and with his lips shaking and a tear running down his cheek, he replied, Thank you, thank you, sir. This really means a lot to me and my family. Paragraph 2 That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets. We didnt go to the circus that night. When I asked Dad why he did so, Dad said, My child, it was a desperate, heartbreaking and embarrassing situation for a father. Surely he wasnt begging for a handout, but he reminded me of my father, when I was young. He paused for a while, as if wandering in his memory. We should appreciate what we have obtained from life and seize every opportunity to help others. We didnt go to the circus tonight, but we didnt go without. 【分析】 这是一篇读后续写作文。 【详解】 通过阅读所给文章可知， 文章主要讲述了作者十几岁的时候， 有一次和父亲排队买马戏团的 票。最后，排在他们前面的只有一个有八个孩子的家庭了。人们可以感觉到他们以前从来没 有去过马戏团。这将是他们年轻生活中的亮点。父亲和母亲非常自豪地站在那里。后来女售 票员报出了价格， 他们却没有足够的钱。 他怎么能转身告诉他的八个孩子他没有足够的钱带 他们去看马戏呢？而作者他们也一点也不富裕， 所以能理解孩子们的感受， 为他们感到难过。 续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：看到发生了什么，爸爸把手伸进口袋，掏出一张 20 美 元的钞票， 把它扔在地上。 所以后文应该是讲述作者的父亲用一个巧妙的方式帮助了这家人， 后文主要描述那个父亲拿到钱后的反应，他非常感谢作者的父亲；第二段开头是：那天，我 和爸爸回到车里， 没有买任何票就开车回家了。 本段应该写父亲告诉作者自己这么做的原因， 作者也从中意识到我们应该珍惜我们从生活中获得的一切，抓住每一个机会去帮助别人。 最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右。 【点睛】 本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：pick up, tap on, fall out of, mean a lot 等高级词汇；When I asked Dad why he did so, Dad said, My child, it was a desperate, heartbreaking and embarrassing situation for a father. Surely he wasnt begging for a handout, but he reminded me of my father, when I was young. 运用了时间状语从句；We should appreciate what we have obtained from life and seize every opportunity to help others.运用了宾语从句；等 高级句式。 2.（2020 河北承德市 高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 While driving, I sensed something wrong with my car. Pulling into the first parking lot I found, I stopped it and climbed out to assess the situation. My heart sank as I discovered that one of my rear(后面的) tires was flat. Id bought the secondhand car several months before, but it didnt include a spare tire. Although I knew I needed to purchase one, my schedule was so tight that I hadnt done it yet. Because I was working full-time in the emergency room at a local hospital and taking evening classes at a university fifty miles away. Now here I was, alone forty miles from home. In those days, cell phones were a luxury. I had no way to call for assistance. My spirits grew darker the minute I checked the place where I had pulled over. No one was around, except a rusty, red truck. It was getting dark. I had two options: stay in my car until morning or start walking in hopes of finding a convenience store with a pay phone. Neither option appealed to me. I about to grab my purse and set off on foot when a man came out from what seemed to be a law office. Pulling a set of keys from his pocket, he locked the office door, and then turned and saw me standing next to my car. I must have looked scared and confused as he headed straight toward me. Can I help you with anything? he asked. Judging from his appearance, I decided I could trust him. I have a flat tire but dont have a spare, I said, relieved to see him. I can help you remove the flat and then drive you to a tire shop to get it fixed, he said. I remembered the cautionary(告诫的) words my parents had drilled into my head: Never get in a car with a stranger. Thats okay, I said. Thanks anyway. 注意： 1.续写词数应为 150 左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The man shrugged, walked to his truck and drove away. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________ Half an hour later, he was back. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________ 【答案】The man shrugged, walked to his truck and drove away. My heart sank as I watched him pull out of the parking lot and onto the street. Regretting bitterly, I set out on foot to find the nearest convenience store. Id barely walked ten steps when the truck pulled back into the parking lot. The man got out and walked over to me. I cant leave you alone like this. Ill take the flat to the tire shop and get it fixed for you. Half an hour later, he was back. The tire store was closing just as I pulled in, he said, coming over to my car. I told them you were alone, and they agreed to stay and fix it for you. Thank you so much, I said, watching as he replaced the wheel. How much do I owe you? It cost eighty-five dollars because they had to replace the tire itself. The hole was too big to repair. Eighty-five dollars! That would put a serious burden on my budget. Yet I was grateful for all hed done to help a stranger. 【分析】 本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，作者独自在外车胎瘪了，几乎没有人， 在天快黑时一个男人愿意帮助作者把车胎拆掉并且送他去轮胎店修理， 这事作者想起来了父 母和他说过不要和陌生人一起上车。 【详解】 续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：那人耸耸肩，走到他的卡车前，开车走了所以本段 应该写这个男人开车走后作者的心情，以及之后男人还会做出怎么样的举动，是否会返回。 第二段的开头是： 半小时后， 他回来了所以本段应该写这个男人回来之后是如何帮助作 者以及和作者之间关于修轮胎的对话， 作者最后很感激这个人为帮助一个陌生人所做的一切。 续写时还要注意所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右。按要求完成写作任务。 【点睛】 文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: 运用 原因状语从句 It cost eighty-five dollars because they had to replace the tire itself. 运用省略 that 引导的定语从句 Yet I was grateful for all hed done to help a stranger.高级句式的应用提升了写 作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。 3.（2020 辽宁高三月考）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一 篇完整的短文. My single mother used to take on several jobs just in order to make ends meet.When I was fifteen years old, she started her own business, and things began to get easier financially.There was no longer a question as to whether she would be able to afford groceries for the week. The following spring, when I was sixteen years old, a new family moved into our neighborhood.The wife, Melissa, quickly made friends with my mother, and the children, though younger than me, became my pals soon.They lived within walking distance from us, and once school let out for the summer, I would walk over to their house to watch Disney movies while my mother was at work. One afternoon, I was at their house during lunchtime, and they were generous enough to include me in the meal.Their daughter, ten at the time, requested a glass of milk with her food.Melissa stated, We are out of milk, and we dont have any more money for groceries this week. She suddenly realized that I was present and explained with a defeated look, Money has been really tight. The family had recently moved to Central Pennsylvania from California because Melissa had been offered a good job.The position had not worked out, and her husband had to take the first job he could find.They had uprooted their children and moved across the country, leaving behind family and friends, only to end up in trouble.I thought about our own circumstances just a year earlier. Later, I carne home with a heavy heart as I reflected on their hardship.I told my mother about the rough time Melissa was experiencing.Do you think we could help them? I asked.In response, she immediately opened the cupboard doors and started pulling out food.We searched each cabinet, grabbing bag after bag, can after can-cereal, peanut butter, spaghetti sauce, and more.Then we handled the canning shelf where my mothers precious homemade goods were stored.We found a sizable box and packed it full. 注意:1.续写词数应为 150 左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答. Then we drove to our friends house, made our way to the door with our box and bags, and knocked eagerly. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________ Looking at my mother, I felt proud to be the daughter of this incredible woman. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Then we drove to our friends house, made our way to the door with our box and bags, and knocked eagerly.When they opened the door, all four of them were there, clearly surprised by our visit, As we stepped inside the kitchen, their eyes found the box, and the parents jaws dropped.Handing the items over to them, my mother said, We just wanted to bless you.Then my mother hugged the wife and patted her softly on the shoulder.After that, my mother naturally helped her friend to put the groceries in place, smiling at her friend from time to time. Looking at my mother, I felt proud to be the daughter of this incredible woman.She was the one who had worked so hard to pay for the groceries that she didnt hesitate to give to those in need.Because of her, we were able to share this amazing experience.What a great example she set for me that day! Though our intentions were to bless our friends, thirteen years later I still feel like Im the one who received the greatest blessing: one of my most cherished memories with my mother. 【分析】 这是一篇故事类读后续写。 【详解】 本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，作者的单身母亲过去为了收支平衡，常 常要干好几份工作。在作者 15 岁的时候，她的妈妈开始自己做生意，经济状况开始好转。 第二年春天，一个新家庭搬进了我们的社区。作者在了解到这家人的困难之后，作者和她的 妈妈无私的伸出援助之手。 续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：然后我们开车到朋友家，拿着箱子和袋子来到门口， 急切地敲门。 所以应该写进入邻居家后的这家人的反应和妈妈的做法， 要详细描述作者和妈 妈的做法以及邻居的吃惊和感激之情和妈妈一直对这个家庭的不间断的帮助等。 第二段开头 是：看着我的母亲，我为自己是这个了不起的女人的女儿而感到自豪。本段应该写妈妈虽然 以前生活很艰难， 但是在富裕之后仍然在坚持帮助他人以及作者对妈妈的无比的骄傲和崇拜 之情。 续写时要求使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度， 我们要熟悉所给划 线词语， 恰当的时候加以运用。 最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 续写完成后， 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。 【点睛】 本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：hand over；put in place; from time to time; feel proud to; be able to等高级词汇； 感叹句What a great example she set for me that day! ; as 引导的时间状语从句，As we stepped inside the kitchen, their eyes found the box, and the parents jaws dropped。 4.（2020 邢台市第二中学高三月考）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一 个完整的故事，续写的词数应为 150 左右。 The day of the balloon festival, I felt as light as a hot-air balloon. This year I wouldnt just be watching. Id be riding in Mr. Js truck, following the balloon and meeting it when it came down. It was a perfect day. Dad and I drove down the road around the lake and turned into the parking area. Dad pointed to the lake. Thats where you are to find the workers, he said. We came to a stop and I got out of the car. And then I saw a white bird with brown head and skinny legs. It cried and thrashed( 拍 打 ) in the dirt in front of the cars. Its wings looked broken. Suddenly it shrieked (悲鸣)and flew off. Dad, I called, but my father was watching the balloons. Its a killdeer(北美喧鹆). I turned to see a silver- haired old woman. It has a nest here somewhere, she said. In the parking area? I asked. She nodded firmly. It was a nesting place before it became a parking area.! Jack! Dad called It is time for us to meet Mr. J. I have to go. I said. But the woman pointed to with her walking stick. There was a clutch of killdeers eggs. They were almost in the road of cars, trucks, and motorbikes. Suddenly, the parent bird was back, its wings twisted again. Jack! Dad called again. Jack, the balloons are ready to come down. Dad! I am A truck roared over the hill. That is Mr. J. Dad jump on to the truck. Whats the matter? We must go now. asked Dad angrily from the truck. Paragraph 1： Dad, I am not going, I said. Paragraph 2： Soon a ring of cars surrounded the nest. 【答案】Dad, Im not going. I said. I have to stay here so the cars wont roll over the nest. Because of so many things to deal with, my dad went away with Mr. J. Then the woman reminded me that it was time to come up with a plan to protect the nest. Ju