精选精析12.读后续写类25篇（三）-2021届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析（一）.docx

2021 届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析（一）届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析（一）12 读后续写类读后续写类 25 篇（三）篇（三） 1. （2020 山东高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为 150 左右。 The mall? Really, Mom? 13-year-old Michelle asks her mother as her sister Nicole, three, looks on. Absolutely. Patty smiles. You girls deserve some fun, and I need to get out of the house. With dialysis (透析) treatments every five hours, Patty rarely ventures (冒险) from her Raymond, New Hampshire, home. Shes also been waiting four years to receive a callthe call that would call her for the double organ transplant (移植) she so desperately needs to livethe call that could come at any time. There, Patty smiles. Lets go have an adventure! Before leaving, Patty phones her firefighter husband Gary. But theres no answer. Patty and her children arrive at the mall. Whoa! Patty laughs, forgetting in the excitement to call Gary. At 3:05 Gary returns to the fire house. Just as hes about to phone home to check on Patty, the phone is ringing! Weve got a match! Pattys doctor says. But shes got to Charlotte, North Carolina, by midnight. Garys heart beats fast as he calls home. Why doesnt she answer? Gary dials again and again. Gary worries at the fire station. Hes booked four tickets on both of the two flights to North Carolina, a 6 pm from nearby Manchester or a 7:25 pm from Boston. Where are you Patty? With still no answer, Gary hangs up and dials the police department. He and his firefighter colleagues phone local stores and malls. Now as Patty and her daughters go shopping, the mall loudspeakers are making an announcement. But in the crowded mall, Patty doesnt hear it. At 5:45 Gary realizes its too late to make the Manchester flight. And if he doesnt find Patty soon, they wont make the Boston flight either. Patty still hasnt returned at 6:40. Come home, Patty! he begs, looking at the driveway. 7:00. Its too late! Gary panics. Suddenly, he hears the sound of a car! Patty! he cries. Spotting her car pulling into the driveway, he calls the fire department. Get that helicopter here! he shouts. Shes home! Paragraph 1: Patty spots Gary racing toward her, a nervous look on his face and suitcases in his hands! _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: At 7:37 the plane takes off. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Patty spots Gary racing toward her, a nervous look on his face and suitcases in his hands! She is quite confused about what has happened. Your organs! Gary cries. Theyre waiting for you! But we have to get you to Charlotte! Now! Patty is in shock. Helping Patty into the helicopter, Gary asks the pilot if they can make it to the airport in time. The pilot smiles, Your fire chief got the airline to hold the flight! You hear that, honey? Youre going to live! Gary says to Patty. At 7:37 the plane takes off. The plane lands in North Carolina at 10:50. There is plenty of time left for Patty to make the deadline. After a 10-hour-long operation, doctors tell Gary the transplant couldnt have gone betterthe organs are a perfect match. Today, Patty is home recovering, and her doctors say she should live a full and normal life. I live with the knowledge every day that I am alive because so many people care about me. Patty says happily. 【分析】 这是一篇记叙文。Patty 守在家里等待了四年器官移植，就在她决定带孩子们去逛商场的那 天，医生通知丈夫找到了跟她匹配的器官，需要她在午夜前赶到 Charlotte, North Carolina， 丈夫买好了机票却到处找不到 Patty。当 Patty 终于回来的的时候飞机已经晚点了，作为消防 员的丈夫只能调用直升机 【详解】 1.段落续写： 由第一段首句内容Patty 发现 Gary 朝她跑过来， 脸上一脸紧张， 手里拿着行李箱!和第二 段句首飞机 7 点 37 分起飞可知，第一段应该写从 Patty 和 Gary 见面后到上飞机前的对话 和准备工作。 由第二段首句内容飞机 7 点 37 分起飞可知，第二段可描写 Patty 到达 Charlotte 的时间 及到达之后的手术及术后结果。 2.续写线索：准备起飞起飞到达手术成功感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 按时到达机场：make it to the airport in time /arrive at the airport in time/appear at the airport before the deadline .关心：care about/worry about/ be concerned about /look after/take care of 情绪类 .困惑：is confused about /does not know entirely/ does not realize .震惊：in shock/greatly surprised/can not believe what happened 【点睛】 高分句型 1. Helping Patty into the helicopter, Gary asks the pilot if they can make it to the airport in time.（helping 是现在分词短语做伴随状语） 高分句型 2. I live with the knowledge every day that I am alive because so many people care about me.（that 引导 knowledge 的同位语从句，同位语从句中包含了 because 引导的原因状 语从句） 2. （2020 江苏省前黄高级中学高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续 写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On Sunday,Nicholas, a teenager, went skiing with his father at Sugarloaf Mountain in Maine. They had a wonderful day and decided to drive home to Massachusetts after a final run. They took a chairlift to the top of the mountain, where they split up to go down in different trails. When the father finished his run, he headed to the parking lot to wait for his son. However, Nicholas never showed up. It turned out that a fierce snowstorm had swept into the area as Nicholas was on his way down. Unable to see far, he accidentally turned off the path and ventured down the west side of the mountain. Before he knew it, Nicholas was lost and all alone. His way back to the ski trails was blocked. Whats worse, he didnt have any food or water with him, let alone his cell phone or other supplies. The sun began to sink and he was getting colder by the minute. Nicholas had no idea where he was. He tried not to panic. He thought about Bear Grylls survival show Man vs. Wild that he used to watch on TV. In the show, Grylls is abandoned in a wild area and has to help himself out. It was time to put the tips he had learned to use. He decided to stop moving around. He needed the energy, and the winds werent as strong in the valley where he stood as they were up on the mountain. Plus, there was a better chance of someone finding him if he stayed put. The first thing he did was to seek shelter from the freezing wind and snow. Using his skis, Nicholas built a snow cave. He gathered a huge mass of snow and dug out a hole in the middle. Then he piled branches on top of himself, like a blanket, to stay as warm as he could. When evening came, Nicholas was really hungry. He ate some snow and drank some water from nearby stream so that he wouldnt dehydrate (脱水） 。 Then he returned to his cave and slept. Paragraph 1: When Nicholas didnt show up, his father realized there must be something wrong. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________ Paragraph 2: The next day,Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________ 【答案】 When Nicholas didnt show up, his father realized there must be something wrong.The father contacted the police,and a search team was gathered to look for the missing teenager. Although the weather condition was poor and the wind was still fierce,they didnt lose hope of finding Nicholas alive.However,they knew the clock was ticking,and Nicholas stood a better chance of survival the earlier they found him.The team split up,and one of the searchers who knew the area better decided to sweep a mountain trail he used to hike up. The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile. He went out and followed the sound to find help. He had walked for about a mile when he heard someone calling his name. He moved towards the sound,and sure enough,a few minutes later, he came face to face with the searcher. Despite feeling weak,Nicholas was generally in a good condition,and he was really happy as he was carried back to the ski resort to reunite with his family. 【分析】 本文以人物为线索展开，十几岁的尼古拉斯和父亲去缅因州的 Sugarloaf Mountain 滑雪，在 下山的时候，古拉斯已经迷失了方向，孤身一人。他想起了以前在电视上看的贝尔 格里尔 斯(Bear Grylls)的生存节目荒野求生，成功自救并最终获救的故事。 【详解】 1.段落续写： 由第一段首句内容当尼古拉斯没有出现时，他的父亲意识到一定出了什么事可知，第一段 可描写尼古拉斯的父亲报了警，警察以及派出小分队寻找尼古拉斯的过程。 由第二段首句内容第二天，尼古拉斯听到了雪地摩托的声音。可知，第二段可描写尼古 拉斯被救的过程以及尼古拉斯的状况。 2.续写线索： 意识到出了什么事情报警救援队出去搜索发现尼古拉斯状况 良好以及精神状态与家人团聚 3.词汇激活 行为类 意识到出了什么事情：realized/ be something wrong/ 救援队出去搜索：look for/ search/ lose hope of/find/ sweep a mountain trail 发现尼古拉斯： follow the sound/ move/ came face to face 情绪类 状况良好以及精神状态：weak/ good / happy / delighted/ pleased 【点睛】 高分句型 1Although the weather condition was poor and the wind was still fierce,they didnt lose hope of finding Nicholas alive.although 引导的让步状语从句。 高分句型 2 The team split up,and one of the searchers who knew the area better decided to sweep a mountain trail he used to hike up.who 引导的定语从句。 3. （2020 湖北恩施土家族苗族自治州 高三月考）阅读下面材料, 根据其内界和所给段落开 头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One day I got stuck in the Tube on my way to work. The Tubethats what most people call itis Londons underground railway system. It was about nine oclock in the morning, the middle of the rush-hour. Nobody had expected something unusual would happen later and everyone was doing their usual: a pretty girl gave her boyfriend sweet kisses one after another. Sitting next to me, a young woman with a suitcase and a baby took a scarf out of her suitcase and made her baby a nest, so that it could lie more comfortably. In fact, the train had just left Green Park Station when, instead of speeding up, it started to slow down and then came to a stand-still. Ten minutes passed, though it seemed like half a day. the train didnt move. Had the railwaymen forgotten all about our existence? Had there been a crash on the line in front? How serious was the breakdown? We had no means of knowing. However, to anxious people who are stuck in the Tube, I suppose it doesnt really matter what it is that has broken down. What they care is when they can get out of the trouble. Twenty minutes passed. All hope of getting to work on time had long since gone. Had the train really broken down? Several people thought so, but they were wrong. A railwayman at last came down the length of the train to tell us that the power supply had failed, and that we were not to worry as they were working to put it right. We could not leave the train, as it had stopped in the tunnel (隧道), not at a station. There was nothing else to do. The weak signal disabled cellphones. Besides, the train was getting hot and stuffy (闷). I even began to wonder if we were going to stay there for the rest of the day. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 左石： 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The hopeless waiting in the darkness drove us crazy. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________ As a commuter (上班族) who traveled to work on the train every day, I thought it my duty to do something. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________ 【答案】 The hopeless waiting in the darkness drove us crazy. We could not bear the heat inside the train any longer. Those standing by the windows attempted to open them to let in fresh air but ended up in failure. The impatient complaints were mixed with angry punches on the wall, which made the baby in the comfortable nest burst out crying. As a commuter who traveled to work on the train every day, I thought it my duty to do something. Clearing my throat, I picked up my courage and started a song for the baby as well as for everyone out there: Twinkle, Twinkle, little star, how I wonder what you areUnexpectedly, my neighboring passengers joined me immediately they heard me. Then, more and more passengers joined in the song. When we finished the song in chorus, a cheer went up. Because the light flashed and the train moved slowly off towards the next station. At the same time, I could see our faces lit up. 【分析】 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一天上班途中，火车突然停了下来，车上的人们纷纷猜 测发生了什么，二十分钟后，人们终于弄清楚，是火车电源失灵了，正在检修中，因为在隧 道里，作者和其他乘客只能呆在又热又闷的火车里，怀疑自己是否会在那里呆一整天。 【详解】 1.段落续写： 由第一段首句内容黑暗中绝望的等待把我们逼疯了。可知，第一段可描写作者他们在闷 热的火车里很难受，新鲜空气进不来，乘客开始抱怨、焦躁起来。 由第二段首句内容作为一个每天坐火车上班的通勤者，我认为做点什么是我的责任。 可知，第二段可描写在这样的不安的情况下，作者唱起小星星，没想到越来越多的乘客加入 唱歌，歌唱完，火车灯亮了，火车启动了，人们也露出喜色了。 2.续写线索：等待抱怨唱歌一起唱火车启动露出喜色 3.词汇激活 行为类 等待：waiting in the darkness 开始唱歌：started a song 立即加入我：joined me immediately 露出喜色：lit up 情绪类 绝望的：hopeless 不耐烦的抱怨：The impatient complaints 突然大哭起来：burst out crying 一阵欢呼声：a cheer 【点睛】 高分句型 1. The impatient complaints were mixed with angry punches on the wall, which made the baby in the comfortable nest burst out crying.（由关系词 which 引导的非限制性定语从句） 高分句型 2. Clearing my throat, I picked up my courage and started a song for the baby as well as for everyone out there: Twinkle, Twinkle, little star, how I wonder what you are （现在分词短 语作状语） 4. （2020 江苏省镇江中学高三期中）阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语进行续 写，使之构成一个完整的短文。 续写的词数应为 150 词左右。 It had been one of those days when nothing goes right. I was due at work at 8 oclock, but I was ten minutes late because I overslept. I went straight to my regular post the toy department. It was two days before Christmas and the department was a mess. It caused me to think back to the time when I enjoyed Christmas. That was two years ago, before I went work here. Somehow since that time, Christmas didnt mean much anymore, except more work and headaches. The whole day, I was cursed, yelled at and stepped on. And I still had to finish my Christmas shopping that evening. I had just finished explaining to a man why we didnt sell firecrackers, when I felt a tug on my arm. It was one of the two kids I had been keeping an eye on for a while - security told us to watch kids for stealing. He and his little sister had been looking at the discount counter, where we had all the cheapest toys. Before I even bent down to listen to him, I checked around for his sister. I didnt see her. Mister, do you think this would be a good present for my little sister? he said in a broken accent, holding up a bottle of soap bubble liquid. I dont want her to know about it, he whispered before I could even answer. I just agreed with him. He stuck his hand in the pocket of his dirty jeans and pulled out a fistful of change, asking if he had enough money to pay for it. It looks like youll have to try to find something else, I said. You need ten more cents. I doubted it was a trick, especially at Christmas. He looked sad and went back to find something else. I watched him from the corner of my eye for a while as he looked at other items, but always came back to the soap bubbles. I left the area for a few minutes and when I came back he was still there, t