精选精析09.图表图画开放类写作40篇-2021届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析（一）.docx

2021 届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析（一）届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析（一）09 图表图画开放类写作图表图画开放类写作 40 篇篇 一、图表作文一、图表作文 1.（2020 贵溪市实验中学高三月考）某英文报社开展感恩活动，要求每位同学在日常生活 中为父母做些家务，请以“Housework”为题，根据下面图表信息写一篇短文。 提示：1、短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明； 2、短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3、词数不少于 80，开头已给出，不计入词数。 As we all know, our parents love us very much. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 As we all know, our parents love us very much. They are hard- working. They are tired every day. It is necessary to help parents do housework during our daily life. I often help them do housework. I throw the rubbish away and clean the room in the morning. I help my mother cook lunch. I always wash clothes for my family. My parents are very happy. Besides, watering the flowers is also my duty. I like my parents very much and take good care of them. After supper, I always wash dishes. I think its everyones duty to share housework. Sharing doing housework can make family members get on well with each other and help children live better in the future. 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于议论文。要求考生以“Housework”为题，根据图表信息写一篇短文。 【详解】 第一步：审题 体裁：议论文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求：1. 你为什么帮助父母做家务？(父母爱我们、父母很累、父母工作辛苦)； 2. 你怎样帮助父母做家务？(扔垃圾、打扫房间、洗衣服)； 3. 你的观点。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） help sb. do sth.；throwaway；take good care of sb.；make sb. do sth.；get on well with sb. 第三步：连词成句 1. It is necessary to help parents do housework during our daily life. 2. I throw the rubbish away and clean the room in the morning. 3. I like my parents very much and take good care of them. 4. Sharing doing housework can make family members get on well with each other and help children live better in the future. (根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 ） 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not onlybut (also), including, also 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 5 表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say 6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing 7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking 8.表选择：eitheror，or 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】 范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯， 符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如 I think its everyones duty to share housework 这句话中用了省略 that 引导的宾语从句； 使用了非常好的短语， 如 throwaway， take good care of sb.，get on well with sb.等，为文章增色不少。全文中没有中国式英语的句 式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为 文章增色添彩。 2. （2020 江苏徐州市 高三月考） 假设你是中华中学学生姚平， 最近参 加了一项研究性学习调研， 课题为 “父母是否以子女为荣”。 通过调研你 校学生及其父母， 结果发现双方对此 问题的看法有差异 （数据如图所示） 。 根据图表写一份报告， 在报告中，你必 须： 1.描述调研数据； 2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因。 要求： 1.词数 80 左右； 2.开头已给出，不计入词数； 3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Recently, I took part in an inquiry learning research, whose topic is whether parents are proud of their children. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________ 【答案】 Recently, I took part in an inquiry learning research, whose topic is whether parents are proud of their children. The result indicates that 80% of parents are proud of their children while only 60% of children hold the same opinion. There seem to be two causes leading to the subtle difference. First, Chinese parents are too conservative to convey their feelings, which may discourage their children. Second, the current society excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance. As a result, children believe only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud. To sum up, a kid could only grow into a positive adult with parents genuine encouragement. 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于看图作文，要求考生以“父母是否以子女为荣”为主题，结合所给图片，写 一份调查报告。 【详解】 第一步：审题 类型：看图作文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求：写作中内容中需包括：1.描述调研数据；2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） be proud of; lead to; the value of; as a result; to sum up; grow into 第三步：连词成句 1.The result indicates that 80% of parents are proud of their children while only 60% of children hold the same opinion. 2.There seem to be two causes leading to the subtle difference. 3.First, Chinese parents are too conservative to convey their feelings, which may discourage their children. 4. Second, the current society excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance. 5.As a result, children believe only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud. 6.To sum up, a kid could only grow into a positive adult with parents genuine encouragement. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】 范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关 系。作者在范文中使用了较多高级句型，如：First, Chinese parents are too conservative to convey their feelings, which may discourage their children.这句话运用了which引导的定语从句； 文章也使用了一些固定词组，如 be proud of; lead to; the value of; as a result; to sum up; grow into 等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章 思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 3.（2020 江苏高三三模）请认真阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文 章。 你校新来的外教想了解中国中学生与朋友联系时经常使用的通讯手段。 你经过调查你班情况, 得到以下数据。请根据下表, 写一篇调查报告。 注意: 1. 正确描述数据所展示的信息; 2. 对数据进行分析; 3. 词数: 150 左右。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________ 【答案】Recent research has been done on how middle school students prefer to communicate with each other. It shows that they prefer modern ways instead of traditional ways. Of the 54 students interviewed, 10 of them said that they often called each other. 21 preferred using text messages while 20 were fans of QQ. Only three students said they liked to write letters. With the development of technology, new ways of communication have become popular. They are more convenient and faster, but I think the traditional ways shouldnt be abandoned. For example, handwriting is more personal compared with typing. It is also nice to hear the voice of a friend when you are frustrated. When we are enjoying the comfort and convenience, dont forget those things that can touch your heart. 【分析】 本文是一篇典型的柱状图表类作文。要求根据数据和提示内容写一篇调查报告。 【详解】 柱状图是高中英语课本中常见的图形， 要求学生通过柱状图图中数据和提示内容写一篇调查 报告，属于比较、对照类。通常我们采取三段式写法： 第一段：描述图表，得出结论。 第二段：紧扣主题，根据图表比较分析原因，论证结论。 第三段：发表议论，提出自己的看法。 【点睛】 第一步：读懂柱状图的说明与文字，比较柱状高低表示内容及数据。 第二步：学会看趋势、找规律，从整体看图表有何发展变化，找出特点、规律。 第三步：引用图表包含信息，使你的文章“由图而发”，言之有据。 文章内容完整， 格式规范， 语篇连贯， 关键词使用恰当， 如 communicate with, instead of, With the development of等等；文章并且使用复合句，显示考生有很高的英语驾驭能力，如 how 引导的宾语从句 Recent research has been done on how middle school students prefer to communicate with each other.when引导的时间状语从句whenIt is also nice to hear the voice of a friend when you are frustrated. 4.（2020 江苏高三三模）请认真阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文 章。 假设你叫江峰, 住在一个美丽的小镇。最近, 当地政府决定在小镇附近建一个工业园区, 结 果引起人们的广泛争议。请你根据人们不同的观点, 给当地报社写一封信, 并发表自己的看 法。 赞成 反对 1. 能够振兴经济, 提高生活水平; 2. 能够有效利用地方资源; 3. 可以增加人们的就业机会。 1. 会占用大量的耕地; 2. 会造成环境污染; 3. 会产生噪音, 打扰居民平静的生活。 注意: 1. 信的开头已经给出, 不计入总词数; 2. 词数: 150 左右。 Dear Editor, Im writing to you about the industrial area which will be built near our town. Recently the local government has decided to build an industrial area, which has aroused a heated argument. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Editor, Im writing to you about the industrial area which will be built near our town. Recently the local government has decided to build an industrial area, which has aroused a heated argument. Some agree that we should build the industrial area. If we do so, many new jobs can be created, which will increase peoples income and improve their living standards. Whats more, it can push the development of the local economy and the natural resources can also be made good use of. But others oppose the idea, because they think it will pollute the environment. They believe that it will produce noise which will disturb peoples peaceful life. Furthermore, a lot of farmland will be built on. Personally, I agree with the second view. Economic development should never be at the cost of the environment. We must pay attention to sustainable development so that well have a better hometown in the future. Yours truly, Jiang Feng 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文， 要求考生写一封信给报社， 描述人们对当地修建工业园区的不同 看法，并表达自己的看法。 【详解】 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求：1. 表达正方的观点：1） 能够振兴经济, 提高生活水平; 2） 能够有效利用地方资源; 3） 可以增加人们的就业机会。 2. 表达反方的观点：1） 会占用大量的耕地; 2） 会造成环境污染; 3） 会产生噪音, 打扰 居民平静的生活。 3. 表达自己的观点。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） Some agree；build the industrial area；many new jobs can be created；increase peoples income；improve their living standards；Whats more；it can push the development；the local economy；natural resources；be made good use of. But others oppose； pollute the environment； produce noise ； disturb peoples peaceful life； Furthermore；a lot of farmland will be built on. Personally；I agree with；Economic development；never be at the cost of the environment； pay attention to；sustainable development；so that；have a better hometown；in the future。 第三步：连词成句 1.Some agree that we should build the industrial area. 2.If we do so, many new jobs can be created, which will increase peoples income and improve their living standards. 3.Whats more, it can push the development of the local economy and the natural resources can also be made good use of. 4.But others oppose the idea, because they think it will pollute the environment. 5.They believe that it will produce noise which will disturb peoples peaceful life. 6.Furthermore, a lot of farmland will be built on. 7.Personally, I agree with the second view. 8.Economic development should never be at the cost of the environment. 9.We must pay attention to sustainable development so that well have a better hometown in the future. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】 范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关 系。 作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句， 如： If we do so, many new jobs can be created, which will increase peoples income and improve their living standards. But others oppose the idea, because they think it will pollute the environment.这两句话运用了because和if引导的原因和条 件状语从句。还使用了两句定语从句，如：many new jobs can be created, which will increase peoples income and improve their living standards. They believe that it will produce noise which will disturb peoples peaceful life.使用了一些固定词组，如 build the industrial area；many new jobs can be created；increase peoples income；improve their living standards；push the development； the local economy； natural resources； be made good use of. pollute the environment； produce noise； disturb peoples peaceful life； agree with； Economic development； never be at the cost of the environment；pay attention to；sustainable development；so that；have a better hometown；in the future。等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能 力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 5.（2020 福建高三学业考试）假定你是李华，你的加拿大笔友 Peter 来信询问你每周参加体 育锻炼的情况，请你根据下列表格内容，用英语给他写封回信。 时间 周一至周五 周末 锻炼的时间 after school on weekdays on Saturday/Sunday mornings 锻炼的项目 Run 1.5 km or play basketball go cycling or climb the hill 锻炼的地点 In the playground in the countryside 锻炼的益处 relax myself， be good for our health 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, How glad Im to hear from you! _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Peter, How glad Im to hear from you! Im writing to introduce my physical exercise. There are a wide range of sports activities in our school, including running, basketball and football. On weekdays, we usually run 1.5 km or play basketball after school in the playground. We like the activities, which allow us to let go of stress. On Saturday and Sunday mornings, I go cycling or climb the hill in the countryside and I have great fun. I can relax myself through these activities. At the same time, they are good for my health. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回信，向加拿大笔友 Peter 介绍每周参加体育锻 炼的情况。 【详解】 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求：1.表明写信目的 2.介绍相关情况 1）时间、地点、项目。 （time, place and kinds） 2）益处。 （benefit） 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） hear from; a wide range of; including; let go of; have great fun; relax; At the same time; be good for; look forward to 第三步：连词成句 1. How glad Im to hear from you! 2. There are a wide range of sports activities in our school, including running, basketball and football. 3. which allow us to let go of stress. 4. I go cycling or climb the hill in the countryside and we have great fun. 5. I can relax myself through these activities. 6. At the same time, they are good for my health. 7. Looking forward to your early reply. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other ha