精选精析03.提纲类应用文40篇(三)-2021届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析(一).docx
2021 届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析(一)届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析(一)03 提纲类应用文提纲类应用文 40 篇(篇(三三) 1. (2020 重庆北碚区 高三月考)假定你是李华,你的朋友 Jerry 来信询问故宫六百年大展 的情况,请你写一封回信: 要点:1.时间(9 月 10 日11 月 15 日)及预约方式(官网上提前一周预约) 2.简要介绍故宫大展的内容(历史变迁,建筑理念及风格,书画珍宝等) 3.表达对展览的期待。 注意:1.词数为 80100 字 2.可根据内容适当增加细节,使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Jerry, Learning that you are interested in the exhibition of the Palace Museum in its 600th anniversary, Im writing to tell you about it. The exhibition includes three topics: about the historical changes of the Palace Museum, about its architectural concepts and styles as well as the display of precious painting and calligraphy treasures. The exhibition is scheduled to last from September 10 to November 15. It is required that the visitors should book one week in advance on the official website. I am looking forward to the exhibition because it is a good chance to experience the charm of Chinese excellent traditional culture. Yours, Lihua 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求给 Jerry 回信,介绍故宫六百年大展的情况。 【详解】 第一步:审题 体裁:应用文 信件 时态: 一般现在时 结构:总分法 第一部分是文章的开头段,说明写信的原因;第二部分是支持段,介绍故宫大展的内容、时 间、预约方式;第三部分是结尾段,表达对展览的期待。 要求: 1. 说明写信的原因:告知 Jerry 故宫六百年大展的情况 2. 介绍故宫六百年大展的具体情况 内容:历史变迁,建筑理念及风格,书画珍宝等 时间:9 月 10 日至 11 月 15 日 预约方式:官网上提前一周预约 3. 表达对展览的期待 第二步:列提纲 (重点词组) be interested in; the 600th anniversary; tell sb. about; the historical changes; architectural concepts and styles;display;precious painting and calligraphy treasures;be scheduled to;book tickets; experience;traditional culture 第三步:连词成句 (1)You are interested in the exhibition of the Palace Museum in its 600th anniversary. (2)Im writing to tell you about it. (3)The exhibition includes three topics: about the historical changes of the Palace Museum, about its architectural concepts and styles as well as the display of precious painting and calligraphy treasures. (4)The exhibition is scheduled to last from September 10 to November 15. (5) The visitors should book tickets one week in advance on the official website. (6)I am looking forward to the exhibition. (7) It is a good chance to experience the charm of Chinese excellent traditional culture. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇 1.表并列关系:as well as 2.表因果关系:because 【点睛】 高分句型 1 Learning that you are interested in the exhibition of the Palace Museum in its 600th anniversary, Im writing to tell you about it.(现在分词作状语) 高分句型 2 It is required that the visitors should book one week in advance on the official website. (it 作形式主语的句式) 2. (2020 沙坪坝区 重庆八中高三月考)假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了主题为“青春” 的英文诗歌创作大赛。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括: 1. 参加人员; 2. 活动内容; 3. 反响或收获。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为 80 左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 English Poetry Writing Contest _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 An English poetry writing contest was held last Sunday at our school. All the students and English teachers participated in the contest, submitting one or two pieces of writing about “youth”. In total, 80 excellent works, among which three won the first prize, were picked out and exhibited in the Library Hall for appreciation. Expressing the innermost thoughts in a few lines, students were impressed with the magical power of words through the beautiful literary art of poetry. Many of them said they even had a better understanding of life as well as themselves. 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道,主题为“青春”的英文诗歌创作 大赛。 【详解】 第一步:审题 体裁:应用文 时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般过去时。 结构:总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求:写作内容须包括: 1. 参加人员; 2. 活动内容; 3. 反响或收获。 第二步:列提纲 (重点词组) participate in;in total;pick out;be impressed with;have a better understanding of ; as well as 第三步:连词成句 1.An English poetry writing contest was held last Sunday at our school. 2.All the students and English teachers participated in the contest, submitting one or two pieces of writing about “youth”. 3.In total, 80 excellent works, among which three won the first prize, were picked out and exhibited in the Library Hall for appreciation. 4.Expressing the innermost thoughts in a few lines, students were impressed with the magical power of words through the beautiful literary art of poetry. 5.Many of them said they even had a better understanding of life as well as themselves. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词) (供参考) 1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat 4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰, 【点睛】 高分句型 1 All the students and English teachers participated in the contest, submitting one or two pieces of writing about “youth”.(现在分词 submitting 作状语) 高分句型 2 In total, 80 excellent works, among which three won the first prize, were picked out and exhibited in the Library Hall for appreciation. (among which 引导非限制性定语从句) 3. (2020 上海宝山区 高三一模)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你校正在举行一个“Donate an Hour Every Day”的主题征文活动, 请你据此用英语写一篇 短文参赛,内容要传递正能量,具体需包括: .你对此主题的理解; .你的具体做法及理由。 【答案】 Donate an Hour Every Day An hour is only a small proportion of a regular day, which leads to many peoples neglecting its meaning at first sight. However, “Donate an hour every day” highlights the impact of accumulation and joint efforts. As for me, daily voluntary work may suit the hour best. Im going to sign up for the position as a school library assistant. Being very willing to sacrifice my resting and entertainment hours after lunch, Ill place books on shelves in order and help students look for a certain book or do check-ins and outs for them. I consider it meaningful to give them a hand. Despite the saying “An hour saved is an hour earned”, its necessary for us to donate an hour to others unselfishly. When we make contributions, the sense of being needed can fulfill our internal demands, thus leveling up our emotion and giving us self-satisfaction. In a nutshell, this kind of mutual benefit deserves the hour spent. 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求考生就“Donate an Hour Every Day”为主题,写一篇英语短文 参赛,文章要包含考生对此主题的理解以及具体做法和理由。 【详解】 第一步:审题 体裁:说明文 时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构:总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求: .你对此主题的理解; .你的具体做法及理由。 第二步:列提纲 (重点词组) a small proportion of; lead to; highlight; accumulation; joint efforts; as for; sign up for; be willing to; place sth. in order; look for; meaningful; give sb. a hand; necessary; make contributions; in a nutshell 第三步:连词成句 1. An hour is only a small proportion of a regular day, which leads to many peoples neglecting its meaning at first sight. 2. However, “Donate an hour every day” highlights the impact of accumulation and joint efforts. 3. As for me, daily voluntary work may suit the hour best. 4. Im going to sign up for the position as a school library assistant. 5. Being very willing to sacrifice my resting and entertainment hours after lunch, Ill place books on shelves in order and help students look for a certain book or do check-ins and outs for them. 6. I consider it meaningful to give them a hand. 7. Despite the saying “An hour saved is an hour earned”, its necessary for us to donate an hour to others unselfishly. 8. When we make contributions, the sense of being needed can fulfill our internal demands, thus leveling up our emotion and giving us self-satisfaction. 9. In a nutshell, this kind of mutual benefit deserves the hour spent. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词) 1.表转折对比关系:However 2.表因果关系: Thus 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】 高分句型 1 An hour is only a small proportion of a regular day, which leads to many peoples neglecting its meaning at first sight. (运用了 which 引导非限制性定语从句) 高分句型 2 When we make contributions, the sense of being needed can fulfill our internal demands, thus leveling up our emotion and giving us self-satisfaction. (运用了 when 引导时间状 语从句) 4. (2020 重庆市第七中学校高三期中)假定你是李华,为了资助学校的贫困学生,你校将 举行一次爱心义卖活动(charity sale),请你给外教 Mr.Smith 写一封电子邮件, 邀请他参加, 内容包括: 1、义卖的时间和地点 2、义卖内容(捐赠物品或者购买物品) 3、期待回复 注意:1、词数 100 左右; 2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Smith, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li hua 【答案】Dear Paul How are things going? I am writing to invite you to take part in a charity activity. The Students Union of our school is going to hold a used book sale on the afternoon of October 6 on the school playground which is aimed to collect money to buy books for children in poor areas. Anyone who is interested is welcome to donate some used books. If you would like to come, please bring several used books to donate and sell books with us. It is a very meaningful activity. We are really expecting your participation. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua. 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教 Mr. Smith 写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加爱心义 卖活动。 【详解】 第一步:审题 体裁:应用文 时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般将来时。 结构:总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求: 1、义卖的时间和地点 2、义卖内容(捐赠物品或者购买物品) 3、期待回复 第二步:列提纲 (重点词组) be writing to invite you;take part in;hold a used book sale;aiming to collect money; in poor areas; welcome to donate some used books; If you would like to come; a meaningful activity; expecting your participation; looking forward to 第三步:连词成句 1. I am writing to invite you to take part in a charity activity. 2. The Students Union of our school is going to hold a used book sale on the afternoon of October 6 on the school playground which is aimed to collect money to buy books for children in poor areas. 3. Anyone who is interested is welcome to donate some used books. 4. If you would like to come, please bring several used books to donate and sell books with us. 5. It is a very meaningful activity. 6. We are really expecting your participation. 7. Looking forward to your early reply. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词) 1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考) 2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including(供参考) 3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat (供参考) 4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result (供参考) 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰, 【点睛】 高分句型 1The Students Union of our school is going to hold a used book sale on the afternoon of October 6 on the school playground which is aimed to collect money to buy books for children in poor areas.运用了由 which 引导的定语从句,修饰 a used book sale,说明了活动举行的目 的,表达形式高级。 高分句型 2 Anyone who is interested is welcome to donate some used books.运用一个由 who 引导的定语从句修饰 Anyone,意为“任何感兴趣的人”,表达高级。 高分句型 3 If you would like to come, please bring several used books to donate and sell books with us.运用 If 引导条件状语从句,would like to do 短语,礼貌地提出请求,表达高级。 5. (2020 全国高三月考)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你因新冠疫情无法按时参加赴 英交换生的活动。请给项目负责人写一封电子邮件致歉并说明理由。邮件的内容包括: 1.表达歉意; 2.说明理由; 3.提出补救方案。 注意: 1.词数 80 左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词:冠状病毒 coronavirus ;新冠疫情 the Covid-19 pandemic Dear Sir or Madam, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua, studying at Hongxing High School. Im really delighted to be invited to join in the 2020 Exchange Student Program, but Im terribly sorry that I cant make it. Please accept my heartfelt apology. The reason is that overseas travelling might increase the chance to infect the coronavirus which is affecting the whole globe and has taken the lives of so many people. My city is no exception. We have to minimize close human contact to contribute to the battle against the Cov-id-19 pandemic. Since the program will run until the end of the year, I wonder whether I could visit next term. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求考生项目负责人写一封电子邮件, 因你新冠疫情无法按时参 加赴英交换生的活动,对此向他表达歉意并说明理由。 【详解】 第一步:审题 体裁:应用文 时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构:总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求: 1.表达歉意; 2.说明理由; 3.提出补救方案。 第二步:列提纲(重点词组) delighted; join in; the 2020 Exchange Student Program; make it; heartfelt apology; coronavirus; exception; minimize; contribute to; battle against; the end of; look forward to 第三步:连词成句 1. My name is Li Hua, studying at Hongxing High School. 2. Im really delighted to be invited to join in the 2020 Exchange Student Program, but Im terribly sorry that I cant make it. 3. Please accept my heartfelt apology. 4. The reason is that overseas travelling might increase the chance to infect the coronavirus which is affecting the whole globe and has taken the lives of so many people. 5. My city is no exception. 6. We have to minimize close human contact to contribute to the battle against the Cov-id-19 pandemic. 7. Since the program will run until the end of the year, I wonder whether I could visit nex