高中英语写作新题型读后续写专项练习40篇(含范文及解析).doc

1 高中英语新题型高中英语新题型短文续写短文续写专项练习专项练习 40 篇（含范文及解析）篇（含范文及解析） （详细步骤+范文） （一） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 The Seas Surprise Jim and Andy walked along the beach, looking for an adventure. They joked that some day they would find a talking fish or a mermaid or a bottle with a treasure map inside. So far they had only found shells and rocks and seaweed. Today though was different. The boys felt excited. Sea crabs scampered on the rocks. Up one side and down the other. They were quick and lively. The tide didnt seem to ever wash them away. Then Jim saw a fish. It was stranded on the beach, just flopping around. “Can it talk?” Andy asked. “It looks like any other fish,” Jim said. He picked it up gently and carried it to the water. “Do you think it will grant us any wishes?” Andy laughed. The boys watched as the silver fish sped off through the water. “No. Maybe next time.” Jim grinned. As the two friends walked farther down the beach they came upon a bottle. It was green with a cork in the mouth. “Our luck will change. Does it have a map inside or a genie?” joked Andy. Andy reached down and picked up the bottle. He rubbed it. Nothing happened. He pulled on the cork. Nothing happened. He shook it. Nothing happened. “ Try the cork again. I bet the genie is waiting for us to release him. Or well find a treasure map and have a real adventure,” Jim exclaimed. Andy tugged again on the cork. He wiggled it back and forth. He twisted it around and around. Finally it popped out without breaking. Andy shook the bottle. Nothing came out. Looking inside he couldnt see anything. Jim looked too and shook his head. Empty. “Its just an old wine bottle,” Jim complained. He grabbed the bottle and tossed it back onto the sand. 注意： 2 1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2.至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Para.1: The bottle hit a rock and shattered into many pieces. Para.2: Two boys ran after it. 第一步： 第一次阅读获取基本信息 1.归纳基本信息 2.理清故事情节 Jim 和 Andy想在海边寻宝挽救了一条搁浅的鱼碰到了一个瓶子？ Beginning: Jim and Andy walked along the beach, looking for treasure.Jim saw a stranded fish on the beach.Jim picked the fish gently and carried it into the water.They walked farther down the beach and came upon a bottle.Andy reached down and picked up the bottle.He rubbed the bottle, pulled on the cork and shook the bottle.Nothing happened.Jim grabbed the bottle and tossed it back onto the sand.The bottle hit a rock and shattered into many pieces.Climax:?Two boys ran after it.Ending:? 第二步： 第二次阅读获取情节发展线索 1.梳理续写逻辑：细读两段续写的开头语，理顺续写段落间的逻辑关系 Para.1: The bottle hit a rock and shattered into many pieces. 3 What was in the broken bottle?/What did Jim and Andy do?/What happened to the broken bottle? Para.2：Two boys ran after it. Why did the boys run after it?/What did they find later?/Where was the stranded fish saved by Jim? 2.归纳总结关键词：围绕划定的 10 个关键词，合理创新故事情节 felt excited, stranded感受与状态 silver颜色 treasure, bottle重要事物 picked up, waiting for, shook the bottle, complained动作 back and forth方式 将关键词归类后，可以判断事物中的 bottle在续写时必须使用，其他词可选择性使用。 第三步：预测情节发展 Paragraph 1：根据画线词 picked up, silver, bottle 可构思本段细节：瓶子碎了，Andy和 Jim 看 见一把银(silver)钥匙掉在地上，Andy弯腰想拾起(pick up)钥匙。突然瓶子(bottle)又完好如 初，钥匙又回到里面了。 Paragraph 2：根据画线词 felt excited, treasure 和 stranded 可构思本段细节：两个孩子跟着瓶子 跑。他们进入海里时没有下沉而是漂浮在海上。他们感到很兴奋(felt excited)。瓶子把他们带 到一个岛屿附近，那儿有很多财宝是那条搁浅(stranded)的鱼来报恩的。 第四步：罗列提纲要点 Paragraph 1： hit a rock and shattered into many pieces, saw a long, silver key, bent over to pick up the key, came together to form a bottle, began rolling slowly toward the sea Paragraph 2： ran after, entered the sea, floated on the surface, followed the bottle, took as much as possible 4 第五步： 检查誊写 Paragraph 1： The bottle hit a rock and shattered into many pieces. Both Andy and Jim gasped as they saw a long, silver key on the ground in the glass pieces. Then they looked at each other. Why didnt it make any noise when they shook the bottle? Why didnt they see it? Andy bent over to pick up the key. Suddenly the glass pieces came together to form a bottle again. The key was mysteriously back inside! And the bottle began rolling slowly toward the sea. Paragraph 2： Two boys ran after it. When they entered the sea, astonishingly they didnt sink into the water but floated on the surface of it. They felt excited. They followed the bottle and then it stopped near an island where there was lots of treasure like diamonds and stones. “You can take as much as possible,” a voice came from the coast where a talking fish was swimming. It was the stranded fish that Jim saved and put back into the water. （二） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Scout could clearly remember the night she had to leave her home in Poland. It was the beginning of World War II and her family had to escape as soon as possible. She quickly packed a suitcase with a few pieces of clothing, her diary, and her most prized treasure, a silk scarf. Scout and her best friend, Betty, had persuaded their parents to buy them matching scarves, which they took as a symbol of their friendship. Scout didnt know she was going to America and would not be returning. Scout kept that special silk scarf for many years. One day she decided to give it to her granddaughter, Eliza, to wear to her first job interview for good luck. Scout was afraid that Eliza would lose the scarf, but the granddaughter promised, Dont worry, Grandma, nothings going to happen to your scarf. Youll see that its going to bring both of us luck. And with that, Eliza kissed her grandmother and left for the interview. Leaving the interview, Eliza felt confident that she had got the job so she decided to celebrate by going to a restaurant. Sitting at her table, Eliza felt an elderly woman staring at her for a long time. Im sorry. Do I know you? Eliza asked. 5 Im sorry, dear, but you remind me of my best friend, the old woman replied. She looked like you and used to wear a scarf just like yours. Eliza listened carefully, with her eyes and mouth wide open. She had heard stories of her grandmothers best friend and knew the meaning of the scarf. Could this woman be Betty, her grandmothers childhood friend? 注意： 1. 所续写短文词数应为 100 左右； 2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: Then the old woman introduced herself, “My name is _______________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: The old woman agreed. _______________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ 答案及解析：答案及解析： Then the old woman introduced herself, “My name is Betty. Im originally from Poland, but left there when I was thirteen. And I have been living here in Washington DC in America ever since.” Eliza could not believe it, stories of her grandmothers best friend floating in her mind. She assumed that the old woman must be her grandmothers best friend. She said, “Betty, would you mind coming with me right now? I need to show you somebody.” The old woman agreed. Soon they left the restaurant after dinner. Arriving at Scouts home, the old woman eagerly rang the door bell. The moment Scout opened the door, she was amazed to see her childhood friend standing in front of her. How magical! The scarf indeed brought them good luck. Excited and moved, both of them were in tears. They hadnt seen each other for many years and had many things to share. 【详解】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，Scout 和 Betty 从小是好朋友， 6 但是因为战争原因，Scout 必须举家搬去美国，因此他们请求父母给他们买一对围巾作为友谊 的象征，自此以后他们不再见面，但是依然保存着围巾，直到一天 Scout 的孙女带着她的围 巾在餐馆的时候，遇到了 Betty. 续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：然后，这个老夫人作了自我介绍。所以应该写：Betty讲 述自己为什么也来到了美国，以及 Eliza告诉她要带她去见一个人。第二段开头是：这个老夫 人同意了。所以应该写：Betty跟着 Eliza去了她的家，见到了童年时的朋友，两人非常激 动，不敢相信。 续写时要求使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划 线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为 100左右；续写完成 后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。 （三） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 “If mum finds out that Im going to the beach, Ill be in big trouble.” I said to myself softly in a low voice. I went downstairs slowly and tried to walk casually into the kitchen. As I was walking towards the back door, mum asked without looking up from her “dish-washing”, “Where are you going?” I answered back without hesitation,“ I am going to the garden to play.” After I got out of the kitchen, I breathed a sign of relief. My plan had worked out fine so far. I climbed the fence and jumped onto the muddy field next to my house and started running towards the bus stop at top speed, After half an hour I was at the beach scanning the crowd for my friends, Jimmy and Bobby. Two young men were racing in the canoes (独木舟). After a while, I saw them near a coconut tree. I ran towards them and got into my swimming trunk (游泳裤). For about an hour, we played volleyball happily. Suddenly, Bobby hit the ball too hard and the ball fell into the sea. Just as Bobby was going to pick up the ball, the tide came in and carried the ball further and further away from the shore. I wanted to show off my swimming skills so I declared to help get the ball for them. I dived into the water and started swimming at a steady pace. After swimming for about ten minutes, I became tired but when I saw that the ball was only a few feet away from me, I put in an extra burst of speed. However, just as I was going to get the ball, a very strong current swept the 7 ball further away from me. At that moment, a string of weed （海草）tangled (缠绕) up with my feet and I could not swim properly. I struggled to keep afloat but it was no use. “ If I had listened to my parents, this would never have happened,” I thought silently. Paragraph 1 Finally, after struggling for a minute or two, I still got pulled underwater. ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 When I woke up, I was in an empty room lying on a bed.________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 答案及解析：答案及解析： Paragraph 1 Finally, after struggling For a minute or two, I still got putted underwater. I told myself I should never give up. Then I pulled the weed again with great efforts. The weed finally broke. I swam back to the surface to take a deep breath. I saw two young men in canoes, racing each other. I was exhausted and shouted for help. The two men saw me and raced towards me. By the time they reached me, I had been already unconscious. Paragraph 2 When I woke up, I was in an empty room lying on a bed. It was not until a doctor came into the room that I realized that I was in a hospital. Jimmy and Bobby told me the two young men brought me to the shore and sent me to the hospital. After a few minutes, my parents with half angry and half worried faces walked in. My parents scolded me for running out of the house secretly but were also glad that I was not seriously injured. I will never forget that terrifying experience. Neither will I ever want to show off again. 【分析】 前文提要：我挣扎着保持漂浮，但没有用。“如果我听了我父母的话，这是永远不会发生 的，”我默默地想。 【详解】（1）第一段所给首句：Finally, after struggling for a minute or two, I still got pulled 8 underwater.这是一句转折句，接下来应该是作者不放弃，勇敢地游出水面，求救，无论从何 角度拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。 （2）第二段首句：When I woke up, I was in an empty room lying on a bed.这一句应该是转折 句，既然作者醒来，说明他已经被救，接下来应该是作者躺在医院里，一定是通知了他的家 人，父母来后一定会生气的，父母会责备他偷偷地跑出了房子，但也很高兴他没有受到严重 的伤害。作者永远不会忘记那可怕的经历。他也不想再炫耀了。 （四） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 On a cold windy day, a poor boy tried to pay his way through school by selling goods door to door. Wandering on the street, he was not a successful seller. Whats worse, he found that he only had one dime（一角硬币） left. His empty stomach reminded him constantly that for days he hadnt eaten anything. He had no choice but to beg for a meal at the next house. Hesitantly he knocked at door, thinking about what to say when it opened. However, he lost his nerve when a lovely young woman opened the door. “What can I do for you?” asked the young woman. The boy paused for a while “Would you please give me some a drink of water?” the boy dare not to look directly into her eyes. She looked at the bony boy and thought he might need something to give him energy so she brought him a glass of milk. His head rising and small hands taking the cup, he drank it up slowly, and then asked, “How much do I owe you?”“You dont owe me anything,” she replied with a warm smile on her face. “My mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness.” Deeply moved, he said sincerely, “Then I shall thank you from the bottom of my heart.”As Howard Kelly left that house, he not only felt stronger physically, but it also increased his faith in God and the whole human race. As a matter of fact, he was about to give up and quit before that point. Years later the young woman became critically ill. However, the local doctors were unable to give the effective medical treatment. Finally they sent her to a hospital in the big city, where specialists can be called in to cure her rare disease. Among those famous specialists, Dr. Howard Kelly was called in for the consultation. When he heard the name of the town she came from, a strange light filled his eyes. Immediately, he rose and went down through the hospital hall into her room. 注意： 1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 9 2.应使用 5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: Dressed in his doctors gown, he went in to see her.______________ ____________ ________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: The bill was sent to her room.___ ________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ 答案及解析：答案及解析： Dressed in his doctors gown, he went in to see her. He saw her lie on the bed and recognized her at once. Her lovely face looked pale. He went back to the consultation room and determined to do his best to save her life. Form that day on, he gave special attention to her case. Luckily, after a long struggle, the battle was won. Dr. Kelly requested the business office to pass the final bill to him for approval. He looked at it and then wrote something on the side. The bill was sent to her room. Hesitantly she took it. She was afraid to open it because she was sure that it would take the res