精选精析11.读后续写类25篇（二）-2021届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析（一）.docx

2021 届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析（一）届高考英语模拟题之书面表达精选精析（一）11 读后续写类读后续写类 25 篇（篇（二二） 1.（2020 山东潍坊市 高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was 1939, and the Great Depression had made all our lives much harder. But we didnt know how poor we were until our father sat my brother and me down on the couch in our living room to have a talk. I will always remember the sad look in Fathers eyes as he stared down at his hands, rubbing them back and forth, while he searched for the words to tell us that our family wasnt going to be celebrating Christmas this year. A month later, on Christmas Eve, I lay awake in bed late into the night, trying to talk myself out of sneaking into our living room to see if Santa had come. I gathered my courage, then tiptoed down the hallway, hoping I would see the bright sparkling lights of our Christmas tree standing proudly in the corner of our living room, like it did every year. Instead, I was greeted by my seventeen- year- old brother, Frank, who slept on our living room couch. Hey, little one, what are you doing up? he whispered. I started to cry. Theres no Christmas tree. There would be no presents, no singing, no Christmas dinner. It felt like we were the saddest family in the world. My disappointment overwhelmed me. I looked forward to Christmas each year. It wasnt only the presents. It was that special feeling I got from seeing my family happy. We hadnt been happy in such a long time. On Christmas morning, the sun shone into our chilly bedroom, waking me up. Maybe Santa came! Maybe he came! I suddenly insisted. My eyes searched the living room, but there was no Christmas tree. I broke into uncontrollable tears. I ran to Father in tears and threw my arms around him. We arent going to have Christmas this year. Now, now, now, calm down. Go on in and see your mother. She will comfort you. Dad slowly pushed the bedroom door open, leading me into the room. 注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Out of the corner of my eye, I noticed something different in the bedroom. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________ With my question answered, everything dawned on me. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________ 【答案】Out of the corner of my eye, I noticed something different in the bedroom. Merry Christmas, my dearest child ,said Mom with her two warm arms holding me gently. What is this in the sparkling box? Do you want to know? Then she put it into my hands and told me to open it .Excitedly I uncovered it , in the box lay a tiny music box with a small Christmas tree on it. How wonderful it looked! But Dad told me that it is the Great Depression now, and we are living a hard life .How could you get the money for my Christmas gift ? Mother told me that she had sold her gold ring . With my question answered, everything dawned on me. It was mothers truest love for her dearest child that made her sell her favourite gold ring which had accompanied her for a long time. No mother in the world would like to disappoint her child on such an important day. I kissed Mom on her cheeks saying Merry Christmas to her . That special music box taught me a lessonno matter how tough the life is , my family would face it bravely as long as there is love in our heart. 【分析】 本文以人物情感为线索展开， 讲述了作者在美国经济大萧条时期家庭困难没钱买圣诞树过圣 诞节的故事。 根据原文所述， 作者在圣诞节早上醒来没发现一丁点的圣诞节节日迹象后开始 失望地哭闹起来， 谁知妈妈在卧室里像变戏法一样地送他一份圣诞节礼物， 为贫困的家庭带 来节日的气息。 【详解】 【详解】 1.段落续写： 由第一段首句内容在我眼角的余光里，我发现房间里有些不一样的东西。可知，第一段 可描写不一样的东西，是什么，它怎么来的以及作者情绪的细微变化。 由第二段首句内容我的问题得到回答后，我明白了一切。可知，第二段可描写作者明白 了事情的真相以及得到了什么感悟，从妈妈对孩子的爱和孩子的感激之情入手。 2.续写线索：发现不一样的东西卖金戒指音乐盒提问感激感悟 3.词汇激活行为类 打开：uncovered it/opened it 生活艰难：living a hard life/ living a tough life .陪伴：accompany her/ have its company/be with her 情绪类 .兴奋：excitedly/ thrilledly .勇敢：bravely/courageously 【点睛】 高分句型 1. That special music box taught me a lessonno matter how tough the life is , my family would face it bravely as long as there is love in our heart. （no matter how 引导的让步状语 从句和 as long as 引导的条件状语从句） 高分句型 2. It was mothers truest love for her dearest child that made her sell her favourite gold ring which had accompanied her for a long time.（It is that 强调句，及由关系代词 which 引导限制性定语从句） 2.（2020 重庆北碚区 高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Two months ago, my friend Lisa, Harry and I, planned to do something adventurous, so we decided to explore a deep cave in the outskirt of our city with some food, water, torches and most importantly our cell phones. But things were not going well. We could not find any vehicle to drop us there. At long last, we managed to find a taxi which took us to the outskirt of the city. Another evidence of bad luck was that Harry had left his cell phone at home. After we got out of the taxi, some of the locals told us the way to the cave. The cave looked very attractive yet still mysterious: the cave was so dark, and the tiny sounds made by the insects and animals could be heard properly, pulling us into the cave with some unknown supernatural power. As we were moving forward we made marks on the rocks along our path to remind us of the exit of the cave. And we always kept our mobiles in switch on mode to contact each other in case we got separated and even worse, lost in the cave. As we were moving forward, Harry felt that somebody was following our footsteps but he left his intuition to a joke. When we reached in the deep of the cave, we lost our way and gradually the fog spread everywhere and we were not able to see each other properly. All of us got very scared of what was happening around us. Suddenly, we noticed that Harry was not with us and then we vaguely heard a shout from the depth of the cave and we thought it was Harry, so we started searching for him. But our torches were left no use in such thick fog. 续写词数应为 150 左右 Paragraph 1: So we groped our way towards the direction of the shout. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________ Paragraph 2: After we reunited with Harry, we tried to find the way out. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________ 【答案】So we groped our way towards the direction of the shout. Frightened as we were, we still made up our mind to search for Harry. Hardly can we see anything in the completely dark situation, so we had to feel our way to search Harry with all strength. Slowly and cautiously moving forward, we held our hands tightly in order not to be separated. With the voice approaching, we realized we would meet Harry immediately. Fortunately, when finding Harry sitting on the ground, we sighed with a relief. After we reunited with Harry, we tried to find the way out. Without hesitation, we decided to hunt for these marks which we had made before. I get it! Harry screamed. Looking up quickly, we found these clear marks easily. It was with the help of these marks that we quickly found the exit. When walking out of the cave, we knew we were saved. From this experience, what we learnt was that it was dangerous to explore the unknown word without a fully detailed plan. 【分析】 本文是一篇记叙文， 讲述了作者和小伙伴们一起去探索一个位于城市郊区的山洞。 山洞里面 太黑又有雾，所以 Harry 和我们走散了。当听到 Harry 的呼救后，我们一起找到了 Harry， 最终逃离了山洞。 【详解】 1.段落续写： 由第一段首句内容所以我们摸索着朝着呼喊的方向走去。可知，第一段可描写我们是如 何在山洞中寻找 Harry 的。 由第二段首句内容我们和 Harry 重逢后，我们试图找到出路。可知，第二段可描写我们 利用之前所做的记号逃离山洞的过程。 2.续写线索： 听到声音寻找 Harry找到 Harry寻找出口逃离山洞领悟感 受 3. 词类激活 行为类 寻找：hunt for/search for/ find 大叫：scream/cry 接近：approach/draw near 情感类 小心：cautious/ careful 害怕：scared/ frightened 【点睛】 高分句型 1. Frightened as we were, we still made up our mind to search for Harry.（运用了 as 引导让步状语从句时的倒装结构） 高分句型 2. Without hesitation, we decided to hunt for these marks which we had made before （运用了 which 引导的限制性定语从句） 高分句型 3. It was with the help of these marks that we quickly found the exit.（运用了强调句 结构） 3.（2020 沙坪坝区 重庆八中高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两 段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Daisy, together with her father, mother and elder brother, happily lived in a beautiful village surrounded with beautiful nature. Stepping outside the house, they saw flowers smiling in the sunshine and butterflies dancing in the garden. The family survived on growing seasonal plants. While they lived a very happy life, Daisy did not love the wonderful atmosphere of the village. She really wanted to move to the city and enjoy the urban life. She had a fantasy to go shopping, try on fashionable dresses, watch movies, and eat in fancy restaurants and cafes. However, there was hardly any chance that Daisys family would move to the city as they had everything in the village. One day, Daisy felt asleep during the early noon and she had a sound sleep. Of course, she had a strange dream. She saw her deceased (已故的) grandmother in her dream as a fairy and her grandmother granted (同意给予) her a wish. Daisy requested her that she would love to enjoy the city life as she always desired. Grandmother understood the desire of Daisy, but still wanted to convince her that peaceful village life was better than city life. She told Daisy, Baby, you cannot have access to fresh fruits and vegetables from plants as you have at your home. You cannot breathe fresh air. You cannot play with animals. You will not find peace as you see here! Do you still want to go to the city? Daisy, without hearing the concerns, asked her grandmother to grant the wish. The grandmother granted her the wish but with a condition. Daisy was told that she would only have 6 hours to spend in the city. Later, she would return to village. Daisy agreed. 注意： 1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Daisy then found herself in the city with her friends. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ Suddenly, she woke up as her brother was calling her for lunch. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Daisy then found herself in the city with her friends. They went to see a movie and shopped in a mall. For a moment Daisy was thrilled at the brand- new world, seeing people in stylish clothes and skyscrapers everywhere. Yet the excitement didnt last long, because she noticed the city was filled with noise- making automobiles which gave off smelly exhaust gases. She even heard some people yelling at each other. There was no peace, no silence; city life was fast and rushing, Daisy thought. Suddenly, she woke up as her brother was calling her for lunch. Recalling what happened in the dream, Daisy realized that her peaceful village life was so wonderful that she didnt need to envy those who lived in the crowded city. At lunch, Daisy shared the dream. City life can be luring to people, for they have easy access to entertainment facilities and better infrastructure. But here I have the chance to appreciate the sounds the world makes without being bothered by noisy vehicles and people, she told her family. 【分析】 本文以事件发展的先后顺序为线索而展开， 主要介绍了和家人住在乡村的小女孩一心想要去 城市生活，有一天梦见了祖母答应帮自己完成这个愿望，但只能在城市待六个小时。 【详解】 1.段落续写： 根据第一段首句内容Daisy 发现自己和朋友们在城里可知，该段可续写 Daisy 在城里的 所见、所闻、所感。 根据第二段首句内容突然，当她哥哥叫她吃午饭时，她醒了可知，该段主要续写 Daisy 苏醒后对城市生活和乡村生活的新认识。 2.续写线索：Daisy 发现自己和朋友们在城里对城市生活感到激动注意到城市充满 了制造噪音的汽车， 释放难闻的废气以及大喊大叫的人们梦醒了不再羡慕城市生活 Daisy 分享这个梦住在乡村可以不用被嘈杂的车辆和人群所打扰 3.词汇激活 行为类： 注意到：notice/take notice of/be aware of 打扰：bother/disturb/interfere with 情绪类： 激动：be thrilled at/be excited about/be in high spirits 羡慕：envy/be jealous of/be envious of/green- eyed monster 【点睛】 高分句型 1 Yet the excitement didnt last long, because she noticed the city was filled with noise- making automobiles which gave off smelly exhaust gases.（because 引导原因状语从句； which 引导限制性定语从句） 高分句型 2 Recalling what happened in the dream, Daisy realized that her peaceful village life was so wonderful that she didnt need to envy those who lived in the crowded city. （现在分词结构 作状语；what 引导宾语从句；第一个 that 引导宾语从句；so.that 引导结果状语从句；who 引导限制性定语从句） 4.（2020 全国高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文。续写的 词数应为 150 左右。 When life throws us a dirty curveball, it typically doesnt make any sense to us, and our natural emotional reaction might be to get extremely upset and scream at the top of our lungs. But how does this help our trouble? Obviously, it doesnt. This evening I met a friend at a local bar. She brought her brand- new laptop along so she could show me some of her latest digital art designs. As we chatted and scanned through her artwork, the laptop suddenly started making an unhealthy buzzing noise, then the screen flashed on and off and then cut off completely. And as we both stared at one another in confusion, the smell of fried computer circuits consumed our noses. The barkeeper and even some customers came up afterwards and asked what was wrong with the computer. I grabbed the laptop to inspect it and the problem instantly revealed itself. The bottom of the laptop was wet and an empty, spilt water glass rested against the side of her purse just behind where the laptop was sitting. In the midst of us chatting and shifting the laptops 17 inch screen back and forth, we somehow spilt a glass of water that the barkeeper had placed behind the screen by mistake, which was out of our view. This situation, running normal logic, the next thing would soon get into a heated argument over damage. When I glanced at my friend with a little bit of worry, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______