1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习个人成长减轻体重和克服恐惧使自己变得更好1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文But then it all started changing.Something clicked.I suddenly determined to go on a diet,and lost some weight.It was tough.I felt hungry all the time.I was always tempted by the smell of bread and hamburger,even when I didnt see th
2、em.But the toughest thing was that even if I had just had my meals,I felt hunger mentally.However,I held on.In over a period of 6 months I finally managed to stick to one of my diets.I didnt know how.But I did make it.The loss of 90 lbs brought me from overweight straight down to underweight.This is
3、nt the best part.More importantly and inspiringly,I suddenly found strength in me.I realized I could be totally different.And maybe,I could even be whatever I wanted to be.This taught me that I could change myself.Then I wondered,perhaps,I could also get rid of those of my fears,just like I succeede
4、d in losing my extra pounds.It might not be easy,but it might not be that difficult.4续写原文With him yelling by me,my ear drums almost got broken,for his mouth was so close to my ears.For a while,I even thought of shouting back at him and stopping his yelling.People around were turning to look at him,a
5、nd I could read their thoughts,“Is he never going to stop?”But He seemed blind to those looks.At half-time,I escaped by walking for a few minutes outside the stadium.I was thinking of seeking an empty seat in the student section across the stadium,but to my disappointment,the seats were all taken.I
6、had no choice but to go back to the guy.To make matters worse,when returning to my seat,I missed my steps and fell heavily on the stairs.As I was struggling to stand up,a pair of huge hands helped me from behind.5段首句Para 1:Chance presented itself soon.Para 2:It was from that point on that I started
7、changing rapidly.6Part 2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在成长的过程中如何找到力量去改变自己减轻体重和克服恐惧使自己变得更好的故事。9续写思路分析 Para 1:Chance presented itself soon.由第一段首句内容“机会很快就出现了。”可知，第一段可描写作者利用公开演讲如何摆脱内心恐惧的经过。10续写思
8、路分析 Para 2:It was from that point on that I started changing rapidly.由第二段首句内容“从那时起，我就开始迅速地改变了。”可知，第二段可描写作者在成功减重和摆脱恐惧之后，很快地进行了其他方面的自身改变。11续写思路分析 续写线索 公开演讲摆脱恐惧其他改变感悟12续写素材 可用词汇：行为类 消失：disappear/vanish 摆脱：get rid of/extricate oneself from 开始：start/begin 情绪类 害怕：fear/dread13续写素材 可用句型：高分句型1.Using the fact
9、 that I could change,and that I could get rid of my fears,I started working on them one by one.(由第一个that引导的定语从句和第二个that引导的同位语从句，现在分词作状语)高分句型2My fear of greeting strangers,my fear of talking to strangers,my fear of asking simple questions I should already know,my fear of hanging out with people,my fe
10、ar of not knowing things,my fear of making new friends,classmates and teachers,my fear of being myself,all of which help make me a better one.(“代词+of+which”结构的非限制性定语从句)14Part 3范文呈现15范文呈现 Chance presented itself soon.One single time,I heard about a public speaking thing going on at my university,and
11、for the first time,I actually managed to build up the courage to go there.It was liberating.For the first time I was able to share my story,and able to do it in front of dozens of people potentially judging me,and suddenly all the random fears about speaking publicly started disappearing.This taught
12、 me I could get rid of my fears.16范文呈现It was from that point on that I started changing rapidly.Using the fact that I could change,and that I could get rid of my fears,I started working on them one by one.My fear of greeting strangers,my fear of talking to strangers,my fear of asking simple question
13、s I should already know,my fear of hanging out with people,my fear of not knowing things,my fear of making new friends,classmates and teachers,my fear of being myself,all of which help make me a better one.17范文译文机会很快就出现了。有一次，我听说我的大学正在进行公开演讲，这是我第一次鼓起勇气去那里。这是一种解放。我第一次能够分享我的故事，并且能够在几十个可能评判我的人面前分享，突然间，所有对公开演讲的随机恐惧都开始消失了。这教会了我可以摆脱恐惧。18范文译文正是从那时起，我开始迅速改变。利用我可以改变的事实，我可以摆脱恐惧，我开始一个接一个地解决它们。我害怕与陌生人打招呼，害怕与陌生人交谈，害怕问我应该“已经知道”的简单问题，害怕与人交往，害怕不了解事情，害怕结交新朋友、同学和老师，害怕做自己，所有这些都有助于我变得更好。19Part 4努力方向20高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语21定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）22Thank you!
