1、读后续写捡手机One afternoon after school,Mary and her brother,Keith,were eating at a cafe near their home.That afternoon,they had to share their table with another person.That person was a young lady in her twenties.After eating,she went to the restroom.Without realizing,she had left her handphone on the t
2、able.Five minutes later,she came out and walked out of the cafe without looking back.Mary saw the handphone on the table.She quickly told Keith,“Keith,the girl left her handphone behind.”Keith looked at the handphone,It took his breath away.It was one of the latest models on the market.Keith had alw
3、ays wanted a handphone.But his parents had told him,“You dont need one.You can always use the house phone.”He stared at it for some minutes.Then he said slowly,pausing on every word,“I want to take the handphone.”Mary could not believe her ears.She merely stared at her brother,“You cant!What if the
4、owner comes to look for it?”Having made the decision,Keith quickly grabbed the handphone and put it in his schoolbag.Then,he took Marys hand and led her out of the cafe quickly.Once back home,Keith locked his house door with trembling hands.Inside his room,he took out the beauty.Oh,he liked it so mu
5、ch.Now he had his own handphone.Soon,he was polishing it happily.But Mary told him,“Keith,you cannot keep the handphone.What will you tell Father about this?He will ask you how you got the handphone.”Keith said quickly,“I will say a friend lent it to me.”Mary said,“Now you are lying too.”Oh dear!Whe
6、n had Keith turned so dishonest?Then Mary saw a house phone number on the plastic cover of the handphone,“This is the girls phone number.Why dont we just call this number?We will talk to her and ask her to come and take back her handphone.”She was trying to talk some sense into him.【写作指导】前文概述：前文概述：M
7、ary和她的弟弟在餐馆就餐时，看到了一个被忘在餐桌上的手机，此时机主已经离开。她的弟弟一直想要一部手机，便不听 Mary 的劝说，将手机带回了家，并准备撒谎说是朋友借给他的。Mary看到了机主的联系电话，准备和机主联系。续写思路：根据续写第一段的首句“That night,Keith turned over in bed from time to time”可确定第一段的写作思路弟弟Keith为何难以入睡?他想到了什么?对拿走机主手机的事，是否感到愧疚？最后他是否做出了归还手机的决定？根据续写第二段的首句“Mary was very happy to hear that”可确定第二段的写作思路
8、姐姐Mary为何高兴？他们联系上机主了吗？机主有何反应？他们是怎样归还手机的？通过这件事，他们有何感受？That night,Keith turned over in bed from time to time.He had difficulty sleeping,uncertain about what he should do.Of course,he liked the new handphone.However,he was feeling sorry for the owner.When he thought how sad the young lady would be at th
9、e loss of her handphone,he was full of guilt and shame.The next morning,after a long and restless night,he was determined to return the handphone to the owner.After school,he told Mary,“I am going to phone the owner.”Mary was very happy to hear that.Back home,they phoned the owners house phone.A gir
10、l answered the phone.Keith asked,“Are you the owner of the handphone?Im Keith.I have your handphone.Can you come and get it?”The girl replied“Yes”excitedly,expressing her gratitude repeatedly.Ten minutes later,she was at the same cafe to meet Keith.Handing back the handphone to her and seeing her sm
11、ile happily,Keith realized that honesty was indeed the best policy.1.字数，每段最多空2行2.书写，大小适中，每行10-11个单词左右，高度占一半，单词尽量不要跨行3.人称，绝不能出现第1人称和第2人称，“我和姐姐去还手机”4.情绪She wiped away Keiths tears on his cheeks and hugged him.The more he thought,the more he felt worried.worried-uneasy5.中式英语/时态 l The education he had a
12、ccepted didnt allow he keep this handphone.l However,Marys words surounded near his ears.l Then he lost sleepy.付 失眠失眠 He failed to fall asleep.l He didnt want to be a thief people.时 people多余l She hugged Keith tightedly.时 tightedly-tightlyl You always want to have a handphone.Now,you have.师 l These w
13、ords Marry said appeared in his heart and mind.杜l.told his sister he will call the lady on numbers.孙l The handphone was not belong to him.马 was改为did l He knew exactly the handphone was not belonging to him.秦 正确He knew exactly the handphone didnt belong to him.l I find it so long time.袁 l The girl th
14、anks to them a lot.袁 thank sb.for sth.l.which made both of us happily.袁 happily-happyl If father knew this thing,he will be very angry.李 knew,will中式英语/时态 6.生搬硬套At the same time,they had come to appreciate honesty was of great significanc for personal growth and develeopment.7.单词拼写l Keith seemed a li
15、ttle shame,he walked aside the house phone sliently.冯 shame-shameful aside-into sliently-silentlyl He stared this phone and seemed a little hesitantion.冯 stare at,hesitantion-hesitationl He determinded to sleep,but he couldnt sleep.周 determine-determined l He tried to colsed his eyes to sleep but it
16、 not did.付 colsed-closedl Keiths face turned read.姚 read-redl Inspiring by your words,I learnt my deed was wrony.姚Inspiring-Inspired wrony-wrongl I was pround of you.苏pround-proudl The girl came to thier home.苏 thier-theirl Keith expressed his guity and said sorry to the girl with a real heart.周 gui
17、ty-guilty real-sincerel The young lady is very greatful and come to take back her phone.沈 greatful-grateful8.词性l I will back it to you at the cafe.冯，李，马l Mary said angry again.angry-angrilyl If I dont give the phone back to the girl,what will happened?”Keith said to himself.happened-happenl A sense
18、of gulity was full of his heart.付l The lady expressed her grateful to Keith.何 grateful-gratitudel Thinking this,a sense of guilty swept over him.张 guilty-guilt 非谓语错l A flood of nervous and scare creeps upon him.张 nervous-nervousness/uneasyl He opened his eyes with nervous.袁 nervous-nervousness 正确 He
19、 was full of guilt and shame.l A flood of nervous and scare creeps upon him.nervous-nervousnessl They must feel disappoint/fear for him.disappoint-disappointed fear-scared/worried/fightenedl Even he will lose his friends.will-wouldl There were two people arguing in his mind.A person thought.The othe
20、r thought .正确正确 He was overwhelmed by a mixture of guilt and excitement.9.重复“should I send it back?”he asked himself.Soon,he nodded,“I must send it back.”10.无关紧要的信息Keith put out the phone.So they promised they call the plastic cover of the handphone tomorrow.Then sitting on the chairs in the cafe,Ma
21、y and Keith waited for the lady without knowing what would happen.11.简单错误l He hugged he tightly.司 he-himl stay honesty honesty-honestl Seeing the handphone,the excited looks and smile on Keiths face was faded away.侯 was删除删除l Keith looked the handphone a long time.杨 a long time前加前加forl He was hestita
22、te and dont know what to do.杨 hesitate-hesitantl Its right?马 Is it right?/Am I right?l Keith realize the valuable of honesty.马 valuable-valuel Undoubtly,.马 Undoubtedlyl After minutes,the lady came and expressed her thank for them.马 thank-thanks for-tol He took a determination to give it back.李 下定决心做
23、某事下定决心做某事l Thank you for you pick up my phone.l He stood up walked with great anxious.王 anxious-anxietyl He was afraid of being find he was lying.赵 find-foundedl He bluck up his courage to find Mary.赵 bluck-pluck12.词选错l The moment he imaged the sence that his father found him stealing the handphone,
24、he was frightened as if.高，苏 imaged-imagined sence-scencel Next morning,Keith said his idea to Marry.杜 said-toldl He said to Mary about the idea yesterday.l“When I lost my handphone,I couldnt feel good.”张 when-if13.人物的心理活动和感情不符合常识，不够自然人物的心理活动和感情不符合常识，不够自然捡了个手机，纠结了半天，哭着找姐姐，很愧疚。捡了个手机，纠结了半天，哭着找姐姐，很愧疚。把手
25、机还给失主，失主说：把手机还给失主，失主说：“我原谅你了，不会因为你最初没有把手机还给我而生气。我原谅你了，不会因为你最初没有把手机还给我而生气。”I know you are low spirits,because you are a good boy.何 Everyone should keep a honest heart.侯After the phone belonged to the girl,she took some fresh fruit and cash for them.杜The lady said its nothing as long as he learnt from
26、 his mistake with her warm voice.l Mary and Keith make an apology to the lady.l Mary numbered the phone and then a voice of nervous sounded,“Did you picked up my phone at a cafe yesterday?”Marys heart sank and she took a deep breath to react.l an honest boy a people,people表表“民族民族”好的表达：So beautiful t
27、he handphone is that Keith didnt want to give it back to the young lady.郭雅婷From the experience,Keith has come to appreciate the significance of honesty and selflessness.郭雅婷He would be blamed.郭雅婷Keith was stuck in a delimma.郭雅婷The next morning,the sunlight lightened Keiths room and his face.He decide
28、d to give back.周安然A wave of sadness swept over him.赵子龙She said with a gentle voice;“I know you are a honest boy,you wont make me down.”赵晨宇 a-an make-let 1.From this experience,Keith learned that honesty is second to none.杨悦2.A wave of guilt flooded into him.龚心怡3.The lady came and expressed her heart
29、felt gratitude to Mary and Keith.王嘉倍4.With fear and worry,he failed to fall asleep,feeling like lying on pins and needles.王嘉倍5.A mixture of relief and guilt flooded over him.任秋雨6.Having gone through this experience,Keith has come to understand that honesty is the most important virtue of people.任秋雨7
30、.Overwhelmed by uneasiness and worry,he was sleeping as if he were lying on the needles.李周倩8.Honesty is always an exceptional quality that you need to stick to throughout yout life.张兰兰9.The eagerness for a handphone and the shame for keeping other s things were fighting in his mind,making him feel like sitting on pins and needles.赵盈10.Honesty is always the most valuable virtue shining like a diamond.赵盈重要的事情说三遍：灵活运用背过的短语，句型去写作文，不要自己造！灵活运用背过的短语，句型去写作文，不要自己造！灵活运用背过的短语，句型去写作文，不要自己造！His sisters words sounded near him.Marys words made him lost in thought.
